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~` door ya paas - part 4 `~

Continuing from Part 1 and Part 2 and Part3 : ————————— She got out of the train with all her luggages. She saw her parents waiting for her in the platform. The kids waved bye to her and she smiled and bid adieu to them. She turned back to see him getting out of the train, last from their bogie. He looked at her and smiled. She smiled back at him. She didn’t believe in destiny and knew this is it and both started walking on their own ways towards the exit. ******************************************** He waited for everyone to get down from the bogie! It was the last station so there was no need of hurrying! He stood at the door and saw she was waving at those kids. His brother and sister were waiting for him in the platform. He was getting down when she turned and looked at him. He smiled at her. She smiled back at him. He knew that this is it as he didn’t believe in destiny and fate and both started walking on their own ways towards the exit. ******************************************...

~`door ya paas - part 3`~

Continuing from Part 1 and Part 2 - ——————————————————————————————————- She awoke with a start. She checked her watch and the time was around 5 pm. She turned and saw him also sleeping. Without realizing herself, she was admiring him. He slightly turned and she checked herself again! She was again acting stupidly! She looked down and saw that the mother was struggling to keep her daughter quiet and looked completely tired. She pitied her. She loved small kids. She got down and thought it was best to play with the daughter and let the mother get some sleep. In that way she will avoid him also! She started playing with the daughter and was having fun. The 5 year old son also joined them and she felt like a small kid again. While playing by chance she looked up and saw him. He was enjoying watching them play! She blushed. She immediately turned and concentrated on the kid. She knew he was still watching them but she avoided looking up at all. Soon one station came. Balharshah. It is prett...

~`Door ya Paas - part 2`~

Continuation from part 1 : Feedbacks and Comments are most welcome! ******************************************************************************* She was excited. After more than 6 months she was going to her home, in Chennai, to meet her parents and spend some days with them. A much needed break for her from her work at Delhi. She boarded the Grand trunk Express in Delhi station. She looked at the time - 6.15pm. She was well ahead of the scheduled departure which is at 6.45pm. She settled her luggage in her compartment, and put her handbag in her berth 27, upper berth. She settled down in her place in lower berth, when she saw him. A tall handsome guy entered her bogie and was slowly approaching towards her. He was looking for his seat. He was slightly fair and had a cute face wearing a normal black t-shirt and jeans. On first glance, he looked like one of those very serious guys who mind their own business and don’t stand any nonsense. A chill ran down her spine the moment she saw ...

~`Door ya Paas`~

After many days am back to writing stories(or rather attempt in writing stories ;) ). This story is going to be series and based on the comments i recieve i might change the ending that i have planned for this. Do give in your feedbacks and comments for me to improve. ——————————————————————————————————- The train started moving. She looked out of the window worried. Where was he? The train has started and he’s nowhere in sight. Why did he have to get down now only? She kept questioning herself in her mind. The train left the station and he hadn’t come yet. She hoped he was standing near the door. Slightly worried she came out of the compartment towards the door. There was no one. She immediately went to the other door of the bogie to check. He was not there also. Now she was angry and worried too. She felt like crying. She felt helpless. Not knowing what to do, she turned back to go to her compartment when she saw him coming from the other side. The moment she saw him, she felt like sh...